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Chapter One : Countdown
Members (only the following members may post in this thread)
member - character name - element - Ability
Fire, Electricity, Earth, Ice, Water, Wind
abcdefg - Zax - Fire - Pheonix creation and control
Virgo - Ling - Electricity - Healing
Dark Caster - Betreu - Wind - Air Manipulation
Captain - Carcius - Earth - Telekinesis
Archaic Seraph - Ein - Fire - 360 Degree Vision
Cyanide - Nazu - Earth - Healing, excess bones
Yamiharrison - Ichimaru - Water - Webbing
Arion - Sairo - Electricity - Illusions
~ Follow rules stated in the signup thread.
RP Starts
Zax sits in pub
This war will be the loss of many lives.
Sips Vodka
However I will not be one of them.
Slams empty glass on table. Xin launches a fireball at the tray the bartender is holding, making everything on it crash to the ground.
I'll take another one of these.
*Is standing in front of a tombstone in the cementary.He reaches down and places a flower.He then looks up at the sky for a while and then back down.*
"This war... the one I want nothing to do with... I feel that I will play an important role in it.I do not wish to be here in this war but I will have no choice in this.They will come for power and glory and I will fight to defend myself.If im to join you here, I will do so with a fight and I wont go down without taking someone with me."
*He leaves and starts going to his place.*
Dark Caster
29-04-2005, 22:39
Betreu floats through the air silently, scanning the ground below and the horizons far, the wind ahd been bringing him stories, stories about lands far away and tempers that had been flaring up. Something was going to happen soon, and wahtever it was it was gonna be big.
The rocks murmur with the signs of a future battle, my time is near
Disappears into the ground
Finishes off his vodka
The time has come to prove my abilities and win this war.
Clenches fist and destroys the shotglass
Zax begins to walk out of the pub
Bartender: Hey! you have to pay for those drinks!!!
Zax turns around and pulls out a throwing star
No ninja discount???
Zax throws the star at the bartender, and the star impales intself into the bartenders throat.
Zax turns back around and heads outside. He then put out his palm in front of himself and creats a cyclone upwards, which eventually forms into a large pheonix. Zax rubs his finger on the Pheonixes head
We have a war to win don't we?
Fading Existence
30-04-2005, 21:07
*practices throwing shurikens against a wooden post*
i will win this war...and prove myself to be stronger than any other....and then i will kill that man...
*Sairo keeps walking down the streets of Elementaria.*
Lets see if me order is in.
*Goes to the blacksmith which isnt too far away.*
"Do you have my order ready yet?"
blacksmith-I actually do, come with me.
*The blacksmith takes Sairo to the back and presents him with four katanas.*
"Quite nice indeed."
*Sairo takes them and puts them away.He sheaths two on his right side and the other two at his left side.He then gives the blacksmith an envelope with his payment enclosed.Sairo leaves and goes to his house.Once at his house, Sairo takes his old sword and puts it away.He takes out two swords and starts working on his technique.*
Ill need to train more if Im to survive.I dont want to be in this war but I also wont let myself be killed.
Everyone seems to be preparing... I'll have to do like wise
Goes into meditation while underground
*After some time of trainging, Sairo puts the two katanas away and goes to rest a while.*
Maybe I should make an alliance with someone ,but in a war you cant really trust no one.There are exceptions to rules and I just might find someone, Ill need to be careful though ,because I dont want what happened to you to happen to me.
Yamiharrison
01-05-2005, 01:08
::Hanging upside down from webbing on a tree outside the pub::
He's around here, somewhere
Zax begins walking towards the blacksmith when something catches the corner of his eye. He looks over to see someone hanging from a tree in webbing.
What the hel|?
Begins to walk towards the tree, Pheonix perched on shoulder.
Yamiharrison
01-05-2005, 02:28
It seems I've been spotted, I have no interest in this fool
:: pulls self up into the tree and jumps onto the roof of a nearby building::
Geesh.
(thought)I am sure i will see him again in the future.
Zax creates a fireball in his hand and feeds it to the pheonix, who eats the fireball whole.
Wonder who else is in this war.
*After resting for a while, Sairo gets up and walks out once again.*
Hmm where should I go now? Maybe I should get a drink
*Sairo starts heading towards the bar.*
I know Ill probably find someone there but I guess I cant just hide in my house till the war ends, someone will eventually find me
*Sairo walks into the bar and orders a round of drinks for himself.He then takes a seat and waits for the bartender to come with his drinks.*
Wakes up from a nightmare within an Inn's bed...
gasping for breath.
"W-why won't these nightmares leave me... it's been 6 years. What have I done to deserve such a horrible fate? I have to find out... I must become strong. I-I must for my family's honor..."
Begins to re-envision the moments of his nightmares... of his village, burning to the ground. Of a maniacal scream coming while women's and children's are heard in the distance...
Lays down...
"I just... want these to leave."
Zax continues walking down the roads of Elementaria, when he comes to the largest buiulding in Elementaria, the church.
Zax walks to the back of the church, where there is a torch, with a pipe above it. When the torch islit, the flames come out the end of the pipe, at the top of the church. When the flames come out of the pipe, it signals a war has begun.
Would you like to do the honors Pyra? (Pheonix name=Pyra)
Pyra flys off of Zax's shoulder and over to the torch. Pyra opens her beak and a flame emits from her mouth, lighting the torch. The flames fly up the pipe and out of the church.
Pyra returns atop Zax's shoulder.
Great job Pyra. Zax says as he exits the church doors
Turns in his bed to see the smoke burning from the chapel.
wipes eyes, for he is still weary.
"W-what is that? Wait, smoke from that pipe... So that time has come, very well."
Goes over to the side wall, and dons his clothes, and weapons.
"I suppose it's time again, to prove myself."
Begins to dig through the ground toward the center of town
The death begins now
Fading Existence
02-05-2005, 03:02
*splits the wooden post with one well aimed kunai throw*
*breathes heavily and looks at the smoke in the far distance*
so...its begun.
Hatake Ayame
02-05-2005, 13:11
*Sighs, looking up and seeing the smoke* Beginning already? Isn't it too soon? Nah...I guess not....these other ninjas have no idea of what honor really is....the worst part is they don't care. Well, before I go on my killing spree, I'll go to confession and have my sins cleaned *heads towards the church to go to confess*.
Dark Caster
02-05-2005, 14:30
Flying high in the sky Betreu looks down upon the world, "Since the fighting is inevitable I may as well find out about my competition." He continues his scanning and spots a young girl walking towards a temple/church. "Hmm, I wonder if she knows anyone who is caught up in this war. If she does she could be of help to me." He stops in mid-air and takes a diving stance, plumetting to the earth after jumping from the non-exsistent board. Before hitting the ground a cushion of air slows his descent as he comes to a stops in front of the young girl. "Good day m'lady, I was wondering if I could ask you some questions. You see I'm loking for others like myself who are destined to take part in this great war that is slowly coming into fruition. Do you know of any?"
Hatake Ayame
02-05-2005, 14:35
*smiles* All too well I'm afraid....I don't generally talk to any of them but yes to answer your question I do know them. If you're looking for trouble with them, you've run into the right source to find it *Smiles more* Seriously though, why do you want to know?
Dark Caster
02-05-2005, 14:39
"Well, since I am a participent in this whole fiasco I thouhgt it only prudent and in my best intrest to at least know what I'm up against."
Hatake Ayame
02-05-2005, 14:43
*studies him* You sure you know what you're about to get yourself into? I find it unwise to do this unless you really know what's about to happen....anyways though, I'll tell you the names of the others, deal? They are: Ein, Nazu, Zax, Ichimaru, Sairo, and Carcius. One water, two fire, two earth, and one electric; those are their elements. Remember them; they'll help you in the long run.
Dark Caster
02-05-2005, 14:45
"well the fire and electric ones don't concern me much, earth maybe a little, and water too" He stands thinking, "one circle what a name (ichimaru), you said others, does this mean you as well are a participent?"
Hatake Ayame
02-05-2005, 14:51
I am, unfortunately. It is not in my best interest.....nor do I really want to....but I've been, more or less, forced into this. *smiles* Are you saying electric ninjas are weak or something?
Dark Caster
02-05-2005, 14:52
I'm saying that with my power, electricity is almost not even usable, as is fire.
Hatake Ayame
02-05-2005, 14:57
*thinks about this* So you're a wind huh? That's a bit different.....tell you what....how does an alliance sound? Together, wind and electricity can be much more powerful than separate. *holds her hand out*
Dark Caster
02-05-2005, 14:59
*looks at her hand* alright then an alliance it is, sorry about not shaking your hand but I had a bad experiance with a joy buzzer as a kid ^_^(). My name is Betreu (anyone really want to be curios of how to pronounce it, it's betray you)
Hatake Ayame
02-05-2005, 15:06
ooc: lol any reason you chose that name honey? *raises an eyebrow, wondering if that's what you plan on doing* no j/k you better not
*smiles* I understand.....mine's Ling Xiayou. You can just call me Ling though. Do you know if there's a priest available? I was going to go confess before I went on my murdering spree but I'm not sure if there are any inside anyways....
Dark Caster
02-05-2005, 15:08
*shrugs* I don't know if there is but it can't hurt to go look.
ooc: I chose it cause in a game I had this wind sorcerer join me off the bad guys side and that's what I named him ^_^() dw honey I'd never do that to you....other ppl but not you.
Hatake Ayame
02-05-2005, 15:11
*starts walking inside* Father? Hello? (under breath) Never there when you need them....*sighs* Fine....that's why there's always secondary forms of confessing *makes sign of cross and gets on knees and prays silently*
Dark Caster
02-05-2005, 15:12
*just watches intrigued by this* Not many adhere to the old customs anymore, you are a rare and strange one.
Hatake Ayame
02-05-2005, 15:21
*smiles but says nothing until she finishes completely; stands up when done and looks at him* I get that all the time.....strange, weird, unique.....tell me something I don't know....*crosses arms across chest* This outta be interesting, especially from a guy's mouth....
Dark Caster
02-05-2005, 15:25
He looks at you thinking, "Something you don't know huh?" He looks around and raises his hands, since the doors were not closed wind rushes in picking up the pews and spinning them quickly in cicles. "If you get enough things in the air, it makes for a great show." He smiles at you.
Hatake Ayame
02-05-2005, 15:26
*smiles and laughs* No I mean something about me *shakes head* Men....never a dull moment around them....
Dark Caster
02-05-2005, 15:28
Oh...uhh *he ****s his head as if listening* you'r afraid that you're not good enough to fight in this war, but you need to to get revenge on a certin person for *he listens again* a debt of some kind.
Hatake Ayame
02-05-2005, 15:29
Not bad, not bad.....all correct. I'm impressed; men usually can't read me too well like you can.
*Sairo see's the smoke from down the city streets.*
Its time
*Sairo also heads towards the church.Once inside he goes to a bench and sits down(kinda near Ling and Betreu).*
Im sorry I have to be a part of this but theres no avoiding it.I know that if you were here you would hate me but I hope you understand why Im doing this.I hope you can forgive me.
Emerges from the Inn... and he looks down to hear a slight rumbling like digging.
"I See... I'm not the only one interested in this war of the earthen clans... I suppose I should make my allies now, but alas, I can't get a complete trace of him... he's moving, and fast, I can only figure he is going towards the center of the city. Well, no use waiting here, I should go follow him..."
Clutches katana, and begins moving towards the center of the city.
Fading Existence
02-05-2005, 22:24
*passes through the village gates, eyeing the town wearily*
I am an avenger...I will do whatever it takes to become stronger.
notices everyone realizing the smoke
Someone has to make the first move...
Practices fighting air in the middle of the town
[Aaron, no more trying to be like Sasuke!]
The wait bores me
Begins to undermine several buildings near the center square, pulling rocks from underneath, causing them to collapse
Sees several buildings around him begin to lose their composure, few are collapsing.
"Good... I've found who I'm looking for."
stands, feet firm, hand clutching Katana.
"Show yourself, Ninja of the Earth Clan!"
Zax notices the buildings collapsing
What the hel|? Go check that out Pyra
Raises his arm and Pyra flys off to the collapsing buildings, stoping above Carcius
Fading Existence
03-05-2005, 02:22
ooc: [Aaron, no more trying to be like Sasuke!
XD! am i doing a horrible impression ?_?
ooc:
XD! am i doing a horrible impression ?_?
It's just so blatantly obvious! "I'm an avenger!"
It's funny
Uses the moved rocks and begins to use them to push upward at other rocks in the area. Soon, mounds begin to from the ground in the square, and they quickly grow into large pillars, in a square shaped pattern
Emerges in the center of the 4 pillars
Well, I didn't come all this way to move forth without competition
Hatake Ayame
03-05-2005, 12:52
*smiles* Well it was nice to meet you Betreu but I have some other personal business to attend to.....I'm positive we'll meet again though *walks towards cemetary to pay respects to her deceased family, whom have been dead for 11 years; arrives there 10 minutes later, kneels down and bows head in respect remembering the dreadful day she watched her whole family get killed* I miss you all so much.... *grips one of her katanas tightly in anger* I swear it.....not matter what or how long it takes, I will avenge you all....I promise....even if I have to die in the process.... *tears of pain and hurt slowly fall down her face as she stays kneeling*
*Sairo leaves the church.While walking outside he picks a flower up and goes to the cmentary again.He notices Ling over at a grave.*
That girl... shes part of the Thunder Clan, I can feel her static electricity in the air.She has also suffered a lost like my own, a family member perhaps.Our clan did almost perish during the war.Ive yet to encounter anyone from my clan since then.
*Sairo goes to his usual spot and places the flower on the grave.He then gets up and walks right by Ling.He doesnt stop or say anything but he looks her way.He continues walking out.*
Its best she doesnt know for now of our relationship
Points a finger towards the other Earthen Ninja.
"Well, I propose a test of our abilities... of course, seeing as we are both of the Earth Clan, we should be able to find a spot of fun in this, won't you say?"
Eyes the figure wearily.
"And if I must say so... you do seem like a semi-formidable opponent... similar to those from the academies of old..."
Puts a hand over a Katana.
"Now... what do you say? Do you accept my challenge?"
*Sairo see's the two earth ninjas ready to fight and hides away in a corner before they can see him.*
I better see what Im up against.
Fading Existence
03-05-2005, 19:29
*stands in a shadowy corner, eyes turned away from the fight*
hm...a good time to observe my competition.
*veins stick out beside Ein's eyes as his eyes become a grayish-white*
there...now they wont even know im watching them.
Challenge you say? You're mistaken. As for a fight, I live for it
Stands still
"Oh... so you don't find me a challenge then?"
Takes his hand off of the Katana and scoops up some sand which he then uses to dry off his hands.
"Well... if you feel that way.... Come at me with everything you have, although to make it fair... winner is decided by first blood, agreed?"
Stands still to match his opponent.
Blinks
You're lucky I'm feeling this generous
Put his hands behind his back
Watches as a rock from the top of a pillar soars towards his opponent
Gently raises his other free hand, and molds a Shuriken out of the earth.
"Generous eh? Well, won't this be lovely then."
Send the Rock Shuriken at a direct path towards the rock.
"I see... that you are skilled, but lack the molding ability I possess."
calls back pyra and Zax senses pyra telling him a battle is going on.
Battle? I have to see this.
Makes his way to the top of the hotel, having a clear sight of the battle below.
This should be very good. Whoever wins this will prove themselves to the at the top early on in the war.
Continues to watch the battle below.
Who said I tried?
Blinks
I'm waiting
Watches as three rocks soar towards his opponent
Dodges two of the rocks, as they hit the ground, and the third makes a small tatter in his shirt.
"So... you really mean this eh? Well, I'd hate to break it to you... but just look behind you. For the time it takes you to send these rocks of yours... I've made a wall of shuriken begin to appear behind you. After all, my ability is able to make it so I can mold more than one... and I can just as easily control them at that."
Smirks and chuckles.
"This will be a glorious battle indeed... a true test of two people's struggles as they have gone on. But alas, be glad you aren't seeing... my other self."
You've missed the point, but I'll fix that
Explodes the two rocks that missed, revealing shuriken inside. The two shuriken are attached to separate strings that begin to wrap around Carcius
Watches as they completely entagle his foe, immoblizing him
Heh
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 13:12
*finally stands up, wipes tears away, and goes towards Elementare's center; sees two Earth ninjas fighting and watches them closely* This should be good.....it's not often two ninjas of the same element fight one another....
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 14:08
All in all it will be a interesting fight *he looks around as if seeing invisable beings and smiles as a gust of wind passes his ear* It's about to get even more intresting.
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 14:23
*smiles as sees Betreu* Wow how'd you get here so fast?
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 14:24
*looks back and forth then points up at the sky as a gust of wind blows by* I hitched a ride.
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 14:32
*smiles* That's pretty convenient I must say. Anything else about you I need to know?
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 14:34
*he laughs and wags a finger at her* now now, everything is reveled with time, no need to rush it.
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 14:38
Oh come on.....I won't tell anyone please....
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 14:41
*just looks at her laughing* oh my god... *shakes his head and looks at her* okay, first you have to stand completely still okay.
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 14:48
*nods and does so, wondering what he's going to do*
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 14:50
*you feel the wind pick up, circling around you, suddenly you are shot straight up into the air about 20 ft and fall back down. at 5 ft your descent slows to a calm and gantle landing, placing you unharmed back on the ground*
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 14:53
*smiles* Air manipulation?? Wow that's really cool.....I don't think I've ever seen a ninja use anything like that before.
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 14:54
Doesn't surprise me, we're not the most well known, we're regarded as tricksters and kind of a joke.
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 14:55
I don't think that about you at all. *looks down blushing* Forget I said that....*looks up after a while* Anyways what else do you know?
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 14:56
umm... I'm kind of just a defnsive supporter with strang attack patterns. I could show you. *looks down* throw that rock at me.
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 14:57
*raises an eyebrow but does what he asks; picks it up and throws it at him*
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 14:58
*as it reaches him it suddnely changes direction and flies off, completely missing him* go on, try again.
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 15:00
*shakes head, making sure she didn't see things, picks 6 up and throws them all at him at same time*
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 15:03
*they all change course and fly at you, about a foot away from you they shoot straight into the air as you feel a gust of wind blow up from in front of you, they begin more or less dancing in the air as wind continues pushing them in different directions before he finally lets them fall*
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 15:04
*smiles looking down* I'm very impressed....you can not only read women real well but you can attack and defend at the same time.....very good Beteru
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 15:05
Thank you, I really hope to be quite the contender.
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 15:12
You're doing well so far. Keep up the good work and you should do well in this war
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 15:14
I wish I didn't have to. *lies back forgeting nothing was hter and falls, a cushion of air catches him before he hits the ground and it almost seems like he landed on a oversized marshmellow due to the way the wind is making him wobble a bit.*
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 15:19
Oh good, someone else who doesn't want to be in this war either. *sighs* I don't either but I have to whether I want to or not
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 15:21
*changes voice to sound all old and honorable* It is your destiny *changes back* yeah I heard that line too.
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 15:23
*shakes head no* Nah....not my reason I'm afraid. It's a personal thing....*starts tying hair in a ponytail*
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 15:24
oh really? *sits up on his couch of air* mind if I ask why?
Hatake Ayame
04-05-2005, 15:25
To bring honor to my family. I swore to avenge them all, they got killed 11 years ago, everyone including my siblings.....they were innocent too, they should've lived. They should be here next to me....not dead....*fighting back tears*
Dark Caster
04-05-2005, 15:27
*he walks over* I'm...I'm sry....I should of never brought it up, if you want you can hit me now I promise I won't send your fist off in another direction *smiles trying to lighten the mood but quickly returns to a bit of a concerned look*
In amazed at that girl, she survived the slaughter of our clan too.I should find out more about her.Perhaps next time we meet Ill challenge her and discover the truth... oh wait! Looks like next time is now.
*Sairo eyes Ling and Betreu from the corner of his eye.He walks over to where they are in a calm and collected fashion.*
"Enjoying the match arent we? Maybe when that battle is done we could have one of our own *looks at Ling as a bolt of electricity slivers down his arm like a snake until it reaches his hand and he makes it dissapper* it would be interesting to see two thunder elements go at it too.If you decide to accept my challenge I shall wait for you at a place you go quite often too, as a matter of fact you were there just a while ago.I hope you do accept, Ling"
*Sairo goes back to where he was to continue watching the match.*
Lets see if Ling will show up for our skirmish
Watches as another group of ninjas begin to form.
One is obviously wind from his moves, one is electricity by the bolt down his arm....not sure about the girl...
Rubs Pyras head
The two down there are both earth.
Thinks
Remembers the web he saw as he was coming out of the pub
Dont know what element he possesed, but he was for sure in the war.
This war will definitely be one to go down in history.
Begins to writhe and struggle a bit while entangled in the rocks.
"Heh, nice move I must say... Howerver that that shall not work on me for I am much more stronger than the average ninja of our clan... I am to be much more of a challenge than what you have ever seen, or shall see..."
Smirks.
Thinks: This one... is stronger than average, he seems to be able to match every move... just as my shadow. Heh, he doesn't know my control it seems. This is going to desire great timing however...
Sends a message to the other Earthen Ninja: Heh, you seem to be able to surpass the teachings, and you are quite formidable... however, I would like to request something. Seeing as how evenly matched we are... Would you accept my grant, for an alliance formidable one?
Uplifts one of his fingers with dire concentration... as he makes 2 Shurikens move forth from the wall he has made... one of which deflecting off of the bottom of the Katana's Hilt forcing it upward, the other, meeting the Katana in mid-air deflecting it and making it perform a slicing type move to slice off the ropes entangling him.
To the other earthen ninja, again: And let this be a small demonstration of my power as well... from one great ninja to another.
Loud and Clear, addressing all ninjas in the vicinity.
"I know others are viewing this as it may... and I know where exactly you all are... now if you would be so kind, SHOW YOURSELVES so that you may watch this outside of any fear or horror of what shall come if you are spotted!"
Raises his palm into the air, and makes a cyclone of flames emerge, shooting high into the sky, easily to be seen from the entire city.
What is he upto....
Stoops down to the ground, inserting something into the earth, before propelling it through the rough dirt, until stopping at his opponent's feet
That should satisfy you
Looks at the fire column
My destination has been located..
Disappears into the ground
Reaches his hand where the object was propelled, and then examines it closely.
To himself: Hmph, very well, I thought he'd see it my way....
Looks up as the other begins to engage with the ninja of fire.
To self... again: I wonder... if I should step in just yet... Nah.
Sits and watches contently.
Emerges in the clearing where the fire ninja stands
Make the choice, will you fight me or not?
Hatake Ayame
05-05-2005, 12:58
Hmmm.....seems I have a challenge to go to...*takes Beteru's hand softly* Please...don't worry too much, just let me do this on my own okay? *pauses before gently kissing on cheek and heading back towards the cemetery* I'm ready for you....*looks around to see where he is*
"So you came Ling.I look forward to this battle but i assure you that it will be like none youve ever been in before."
*Sairo takes out a katana from his right side.As he draws his sword, the surrounding area begins to change.the ground stays the same with all of the tombstones around them but around them are little huts on fire.Theres people running around covered in blood while others are died on the floor.In the distance there are ninjas fighting each other.Sairo dissappears into the scenary.*
"Does this look familiar to you Ling? Its the day our people died.This is the battle where the two of us lost it all."
*Sairo raises his sword to point at a little girl crying by a hut.Shes holding onto someones hand as she cries.*
OOC: im changing my ability back to levitation, pyra will just be a pet now.
I would be glad to fight you earth ninja. Sorry, dont know your name.
creates ten fireballs from his each palm and levitates them upward, making two vertial lines of fireballs from each hand
Lets go.
launches all 20 fireballs at Nazu
END OF CHAPTER
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